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Three Japanese Tankas
Ono Komachi, translated by Jane
Hirshfield with Mariko Aratani
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| Sent anonymously to a man who had passed in front of the screens of my room | |
| Should the world of love | |
| end in darkness, | |
| without our glimpsing | |
| that cloud-gap | |
| where the moon’s light fills the sky? |
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| Sent to a man who seemed to have changed his mind | |
| Since my heart placed me | |
| on board your drifting ship, | |
| not one day has passed | |
| that I haven’t been drenched | |
| in cold waves. |
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| Sent in a letter attached to a rice stalk with an empty seed husk | |
| How sad that I hope | |
| to see you even now, | |
| after my life has emptied itself | |
| like this stalk of grain | |
| into the autumn wind. |
Heart! We will forget him!
Heart! We will forget him!
You and I-- tonight!
You may forget the warmth he gave--
I will forget the light!
When you have done, pray tell me
That I may straight begin!
Haste! lest while you're lagging
I remember him!
Making Meanings
First Thoughts
1. Do the three tankas leave you with the same feeling you get from Emily Dickinson's poem, or do they make you feel something different? Explain.
Shaping Interpretations
2. Dickinson personifies her heart by telling it to do things that only aperson can do. What does she tell Heart? How would you paraphrase what she means by "warmth" and "light" (lines 3-4)?
3. Which do you think is more powerful: the mind or the heart? How does Dickinson feel?
4.. Look back at the images in the tankas. What feelings do they suggest?
Extending the Text
5. These poems were written many years ago—the tankas are centuries old. Are they dated? Could they still apply to people’s feelings and experiences today?
Choices
1. Collecting Ideas for a Comparison/Contrast Essay
Finding details. Work out a chart in which you compare and contrast one of the tanks and Dickinson's poem according to the various elements of poetry you've looked at in these collections. Example elements: Subject, Mood/Feeling, Images, Figures of Speech, Message
2. The Hidden Characters
These four poems contain hidden, unidentified characters - the men in Komachi's poems and the lost love in Dickinson's poem. Write a letter or journal entry in the voice of one of these hiding characters, responding to the way the poet/speaker has written about you and about your love.
3. Try a Tanka
In tanka style, write a series of poems that trace a relationship. Describe a symbolic object you might send with the tanka.